Take My Heart - Comments

Your stories need a warning if they're going to make me cry!

loved the ending, so happy they ended up together after all!!

OMG I am so happy that Matt finally realized that he doesn't really love Val like he does with Kallie. Because if he didn't realize what he was doing, he would be making a huge mistaking in marrying Val and he would be killing Kallie. This is amazing!

Niiiice Loved this ending. Glad Matt came to his senses!

Sad to see it end but I'm glad their together. You did a really great job with this, you have an amazing talent.

AWE YAY!
Matt left Val and got back with Kallie! I was hoping so! I would have been bummed! I mean, they were together for so long and had a son together! Sometimes you just have to separate yourself from someone you love, just to make sure you do. It's not fun, but it helps.
The last part was great! I loved it! :D

Pleeeeease continuuuuue!!!!
I have to know what happens!

Nooooo!
Matthew, get Kallie back! You two have a child together! Why let another woman interfere with that! What made him end it in the first place? At least they remained civil for Jimmy, and kept custody agreements between them. It makes it a lot easier for the parents and the child.
It's funny, though. How you described Jimmy is almost like my son lol. He has longish brown hair, loves ketchup, is such a crazy kid haha. He's only a year and a half, but that's him lol. I just thought it was funny.
But I LOVE this! I can't wait to read the next part! :D <3

OMG I started to cry! Man so Matt is the asshole that broke Kallie's heart??? And now he is springing on her that he is going to marry Val!!!! What the hell!!!! He is going to hurt Kallie no matter what he does. I look forward to the next part!

It's been a long time since I've read something that's really drawn feelings out of me. I'm pissed at Matthew at the same time, I feel sorry for him. I really wish Kallie and him had worked out because she's hurting.
I adore Jimmy, you did a great job with him and I love that there is detail but not TOO much.
Can't wait to read the next update! Definitely rec'ing this one.

Valary, actually
but, i hate how she has Matt in this, when he needs to be with Kallie

I like this. Just call her Val it makes it easier. You said Matt had green eyes but he has Hazel green tint eyes. Please tell me that Matt is gunna get with Kallie, I like Val but for this story I hate her. Update soon