In Joy and Sorrow - Comments

Please don't quit! I love this story too much and I want to know what happens next. I can't wait for the next update! :D

please don't quit!! this story is so good! :D loved the update!!

Please don't quit I want to know what happens. I think this story is going somewhere good

loveee this story! update sooon!! :)

As much as I love Ville being there for her, he needs to slow down so he doesn't scare her off. I don't care how cute and sweet his is, it can be a little creepy if you really think about it haha.

They are so cute together. Ville is a good man and it's nice to see him really showing that he cares about Karen with the little things he does. Keep up the wonderful work dear.

More chapters please!!!!!!

Oooo I want to knOw more!!! Please

Poor girl, I know how hard it is to lose someone so close to you. Losing family is a tough thing to overcome and with the rest of her family not loving her..well I can only guess how hard the years after have been on her. I'm sure Ville will do everything in his power to make up for the time she had to spend alone and upset. You did an amazing job with this chapter.

Really good so far. I'm just a tad confused about Karen's age though. But I'm sure it will be cleared up.

:3 I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! You have no idea how happy your comment makes me! :3 and thank you so much for your support in everything, you are amazing! :'D ♥

They are so stinking cute together! The cab ride was priceless and the movie moment when they brushed hands was "awe" worthy. Karen is a really cool chick even if she does have a few issues with her family and I'm happy that Ville is there to just let her be herself.

I'm really liking what you have so far. Karen seems like a cool women and Ville is pretty chill about her being a fan as well. You may want to delete the first chapter of this story since you switched to third person so people don't get confused. If you need help with anything just ask, I've been on here around here for a while now.

Well, you know something, I think you're right. Thank you so much for the advice, I'll try to change it to the third person. I just posted it like that because I have writen already like 14 chapters, and where I'm posting it people actually asked me to do it in the second person. Thanks again :)

I just ready the summary to this and it's good, but you might lose people's interest with the story being in second person. Also if you want I can make you a story layout if you want. I know a lot of good stories get turned away because they don't have a layout.