I sense a hint of Utada Hikaru's "Sanctuary" am I correct? Once again you've pulled at all the heart strings of everyone. I get the feeling that you wrote it like this so people couldn't tell whether it was a boy/girl or girl/girl or boy/boy situation. I love I still. Great job chica :]
What a lovely little story about love. I thought this was sweet and the ideal love most dream of, but I can honestly say as a girl living with a guy it is not fun when the guy hogs the bed, lol!
Anyways onto the story it's very simple, yet tasteful and I think you did a good job with it.
Can I just cry?? I assume this is a one shot and I just want to say how beautifully written this is. It makes me want to bawl my eyes out because it's so beautiful, it's sweet and romantic and I'm glad you pick milky way! (:
Now with your story, Aww I thought this was very cute, I believe a lot of people could relate to this; while others could of only dream of this also. Right now it makes me wish I had that special someone to get tangled with lol.
I just the entire idea, it's a little different then what I am used to reading. Plus I haven't found any mistakes so YAY on that, I wish there was more.