It would have been nice if you used a layout to go with this. The wide screen text isn't really hepful when you read so I'm glad this was only a drabble. The same goes for the rest of your pieces if you haven't used one.
As for the actual chapter, your descriptions in this were flawless and I felt like the narrator felt, tyring to see him and feeling embarrasment. Ths was well-written and pure honest in pure/innocent love. Well done!
As for the actual chapter, your descriptions in this were flawless and I felt like the narrator felt, tyring to see him and feeling embarrasment. Ths was well-written and pure honest in pure/innocent love. Well done!
-Marian.