My Lucky Charms - Comments

  • Fuck You Mibba!

    Fuck You Mibba! (135)

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    I’m here as intern judge for this contest

    This is the first m-preg story I have ever read. I’m a fan of BVB and it was a very interesting turnout.

    This was very cute and funny. I loved how Ashley got all mad and cute thinking that Andy took the Lucky Charms he was so eager to eat. I laughed at that part and thought it was just brilliant. The connection and romantically chemistry they both share is great and unavailable because it was shown throughout the whole one shot even though there was a moment where Ash wasn’t all that happy that Andy stole his snack. It was adorable and very sweet. Your writing style is great. You are a great writer and this story was great.
    July 25th, 2014 at 03:39am
  • epicness

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    Adorable :3
    April 1st, 2013 at 11:27pm
  • FallenCreature

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    Awww this is so cute (;
    August 24th, 2012 at 02:09am