Slipped Away - Comments

Loved it <3

Very cute and you did good on the sex. I think that maybe for a one-shot, it lacked a little detail about frank's dad, but I liked how when I started reading Frank was in denial about his father. Like, the things he said didn't seem to be that bad and how he defends and constantly thinks about his father's opinion even though he's dead. Great job, really. Xo

I liked it
It was sad, sweet, and sexy all in one