Need to Hear Your Voice - Comments

  • Thatmom

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    I know I'm late to the party but I loved this story!! Well done!!!
    May 28th, 2013 at 04:14am
  • mimi098

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    So sad its over :( Loved the Story though!
    October 21st, 2012 at 07:05am
  • kendra-rae

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    Love it <3
    October 18th, 2012 at 02:43pm
  • rehbein

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    I absolutely love that you had them adopt!!!!!
    October 17th, 2012 at 01:57am
  • MusicLover525

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    Nooo!!! Can't it be a joke and there is another part?? :DDD
    However, the end is really cute. Seems like they all hit their happily ever after! <3
    October 16th, 2012 at 12:52pm
  • saudade.

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    I loved reading this! I'm sad that its over, but I'm glad that they had the olive happy ending. You did a great job in this story and I can't wait to read your next story!
    October 16th, 2012 at 12:24pm
  • leecasper17

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    Had a great time reading this one. Staals are amaaaaaaaazing. :) Now I have to find what the next one's about!
    October 16th, 2012 at 12:06pm
  • JDStanley

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    Awwwwww what a cut ending, even if it is a bit cheesy but that's ok!!!!!! I enjoyed this story as always and can't wait for the next one!!! Cool
    October 16th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • ilovehockey4952

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    This is my pet peeve: one doesn't lied down...its lie, lay, lain...so they lay on the bed. Your story is really good! Smile
    October 15th, 2012 at 05:02pm
  • kendra-rae

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    Love it <3
    October 14th, 2012 at 02:31am
  • MusicLover525

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    Shame! Math is a very great subject! :D
    Aww! Finally got their third child! So happy for them!! <3 seems to me like they have th perfect lives!
    October 12th, 2012 at 09:40am
  • AshleyVC88

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    I just love them and their little family so much. I almost don't want it to end! But only so much can be done before its like beating an old horse. This story will always hold a special place in my heart though. :)
    October 12th, 2012 at 07:30am
  • do you feel?

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    I am going to cry like a lil baby when this ends haha gah
    October 12th, 2012 at 06:36am
  • kendra-rae

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    Love it <3
    October 10th, 2012 at 09:40pm
  • nomountainhighenough

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    I agree, the time jumps are confusing! You should really include flashbacks to the stuff you skipped.
    October 8th, 2012 at 11:24pm
  • Marinesister92

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    I loved the last few chapters, but the time jumps seem so large that its confusing for the first few minutes until you get down to when you say how much time has lapsed. But over all i really like it. I was pretty sure it would get more in detail about the trade and stuff. but i still like it. maybe going more in depth with the kids, because the only time we've seen them was the wedding, which i'm not sure how old they are.
    love it though.
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    October 8th, 2012 at 05:24pm
  • MusicLover525

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    lol, crossing my fingers for another inspiration burst! :DD sucks for them though! I wonder why Summer always miscarried...?
    October 8th, 2012 at 09:34am
  • nomountainhighenough

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    Okay a tiny bit of criticism... I really wish you hadn't skipped all of the miscarriage stuff! I would've loved reading it!!!! Flashback? Summer has a nightmare and relives it? That can be just another chapter lol.
    October 8th, 2012 at 06:05am
  • kendra-rae

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    yay! so happy! love it <3
    October 8th, 2012 at 04:25am
  • Penguins11

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    Adorable! I was so happy to see the wedding :) You did an awesome job and while I don't want this story to end I can't wait to see what the end will bring!!
    October 7th, 2012 at 11:36pm