I loved reading this! I'm sad that its over, but I'm glad that they had the olive happy ending. You did a great job in this story and I can't wait to read your next story!
I just love them and their little family so much. I almost don't want it to end! But only so much can be done before its like beating an old horse. This story will always hold a special place in my heart though. :)
I loved the last few chapters, but the time jumps seem so large that its confusing for the first few minutes until you get down to when you say how much time has lapsed. But over all i really like it. I was pretty sure it would get more in detail about the trade and stuff. but i still like it. maybe going more in depth with the kids, because the only time we've seen them was the wedding, which i'm not sure how old they are. love it though. -S
Okay a tiny bit of criticism... I really wish you hadn't skipped all of the miscarriage stuff! I would've loved reading it!!!! Flashback? Summer has a nightmare and relives it? That can be just another chapter lol.
Adorable! I was so happy to see the wedding :) You did an awesome job and while I don't want this story to end I can't wait to see what the end will bring!!