Rockstar ego - Comments

@ xxGee
Thank you for the critism it will help,me so much thanks

Y'know, the plot to this story is really good. And I'm not trying to be mean when I say this, just some constructive criticism, but it would probably be a million times better if it had proper grammar, that's sort of one of the main things to a story. I'd read it if it had good grammar. The plot is really interesting though, I hope you decide to edit it or at least take what I'm saying into consideration:)