Planning My Love Life - Comments

This is a really good story. I'm really enjoying it.

Thank you so much for your comment! We've been on hiatus for a while but we'll be back soon! Really glad you like it, english is not our first language so we're doing the best to keep the errors to a mininum!

I cannot wait for the next update. There is just something about this that has me completely hooked. I also like how you create the span of time. For example in chapter 8 you have *45 minutes later* which helps the story have a flow to it that helps me read it and actually FEEL like I am there. Once more I am enjoying it and waiting very patiently for the next update. Great job and keep it up!!

@ BeautifulNightmares
Thank you very much :) Glad you like it.
We're still a bit new to this but we really wanted people to relate to our characters, we didnt want to write something that was too fictional and didn't seem real. Hopefully we won't disappoint ^^

I know I just comented and all, but I kept on reading. This is amazing. Truly. I think you just created my new cup of tea. Your characters seem very real and I am able to relate to what they live. They go through the same things anyone would. So, yeah, I am going to comment and recommend. :)

How you create your words is great. I feel like I am there with them, like a fly on the wall or something. Your voice is great. What is so great is, I am only on chapter one and I have so many good things to say about this. I will keep reading and tell you what else I think. This is really great so far.
Rye

@ a walking travesty;
Thank you for your comment,we appreciate it :)

Comment swap!

Ya know, there is nothing wrong with this story. It's written pretty well, there aren't any major grammar/spelling errors, and you have a great, flowing writing style. But, for some reason, I just can't seem to get into it. Which is weird, because I absolutely LOVE Tom Hiddleston. I don't think it has anything to do with how you write or whether or not you're good at it, it's just not my sort of thing.
But you're a great writer, so keep at it!

@ WeHaveAHulk
Awww,thank you sooo much :DD Glad you like it! My friend came up with the name and I thought it was amazing aswell,hehehe xD

I'm on Chapter two and I love this so much! I love it even more now because you included his laugh! I'm reading on now, love the story and the name... such a great name, whoever has this name is obviously an amazong person eheheheh... yeah imma go read now...