No Idea - Comments

I only have one criticism for the whole of this story: It's got a lot of speech. I think it would be good to increase the description of the thoughts and feelings of the characters. It just seems like it could be a good way of improving the structure and content. Also you'll be able to increase the length of chapters by doing so.

@ GirlWithFlowerDress
i don't know, yes, maybe :D it would be cute :D

@ mixtape-of-her-bands
so you mean Jack and Mandy will get together? like "Lovers always tease each other"??

annie and zack should get together! ;) and jack is very funny as usual :D mandy and him always fight... :P

@ emilyja
i always update on fridays ;)

this story is SO good (and your english is better than mine...thats sad) Well update soon, because i'm kind of in love

a big brother is what every girl wants :D I think the girl could become his girlfriend, would be a funny 'how I met your mother' story :D

Zack is the sweetest brother ever! I wish I had a brother like that ^.^

lol poor zacky

Zack is so sweet! haha that is a really awkward situation. can't wait for the next update!

@ alleson
never :D

@ mixtape-of-her-bands
yeah there will be some new characters upcoming! next one will be Zack's 6 year old sister :D haha

:D when is zack going to ask mandy out? he's so perfect or her

zack, patti, mandy and jack are single, so they can get a boyfriend/girlfriend now! are there new characters coming? :) can't wait for next friday!!!

Nate sucks omg. i'm so glad something is going to happen between Zack and Mandy <3

awww Zacky found some love!! <3<3 love it!

patti will find someone else! maybe zack? or maybe someone we don't know yet? and mandy still needs a boyfriend, too. also thanks for promoting my story and my one shot :)

@ GirlWithFlowerDress
Took a lot of effort ;D Kidding. And no problem :D

@ thegreathendowski
i'm soooooo proud :D haha and awwww thaaaaaaaank you :)

Okay so I've finally caught up with this now. Are you proud? it's getting bookmarked for easy access now so thank you for writing this and making the world a lot more ATL infested :D Alex's characterisation is PERFECT. Just saying.