And Peace Shall End - Comments

Hi. Hello. Hey. This is me finally getting around to reading this.

Firstly, that banner is absolutely stunning. It's so dark and Supernaturally and...yeah.

I haven't the foggiest about Avenged so you'll need to excuse my ignorance. I don't think there will be much in terms of ignorance though, because this really does read like a fanfiction in the slightest.

I felt so bad for Brian at the beginning. Finding out that his friend wasn't really his friend and that his wife was dead must be absolutely horrible, especially when I think about how nasty the shifters are in the programme. Then again, I'm glad that going into the second chapter, he has Sam and Dean. I feel much safer knowing those two goofballs have him and (hopefully!) Matt in safe company.

I legitimately now have Sam and Dean painted as the knights in shining armour after reading a bit of the second chapter. I'm so glad that Matt is alive - it'd be heartbreaking for Brian if he had lost absolutely everyone! And their reaction to Cas appearing. I had that reaction the first time he appeared in the show. I feel kind of safer now he's there, he tends to just angel-boop anyone that tries to kill people so yeah.

You've actually got Cas's character down to a T and that makes me so happy. His whole angel-of-the-lord thing always amused me a little and in a story that, so far, has been quite dark, that does lighten things up a little which is a good thing. And I may have noticed a little subtle hint of DeanxPie. Yup.

And now there's some DeanxImpala and I am so done with this story oh dear lord. I love Dean's little conversations with the Impala, it's so refreshing and awesome to read about it. I can see Famine at work though. Brian nearly walking out in front of a car for alcohol is really worrying. I've kind of grown attached to him and Matt as characters, I really hope nothing happens!

Oh dear lord, Matt did not jut give up the Winchesters, did he? I wasn't expecting that at all! Brilliant ending!

I only noticed one or two things throughout. which made Brian snapped his (second chapter) - I think snapped should be snap. I think you had put Brain instead of Brian at the beginning of the third chapter too.

This was so good. You had the characterisation down to a fine art and the entire story was pretty awesome. Great job!

Well, I most certainly didn't expect that ending. I was half hoping that Matt and Brian would go on the road with Sam and Dean and become hunters - because really, I would have liked for this to be a nice, long story. But not everybody can have a happy ending, huh?

Very well written! I loved this!

xoxo
HJ.

Overall this was amazing! The four chapters were all filled with great emotions and explanations. Even though Brian and Matt died, it was great, though it was a sad thing. It was great, though I really enjoyed it. You portrayed the Winchester boys and Cas very well. Good job on that!