Running From Shadows - Comments

Agh sorry for the short comment, I'm just taking a break from AP American Lit, haha. You do not have to apologize at all for only posting once a week, high school's been a lot of work so I cannot even begin to imagine what you're experiencing! It's quite amazing you have time to write pieces this beautifully. I personally love this story, I will definitely recommend this to everyone :) I adore your layout and I've fallen in love with the way you write, you have an immense amount of voice in your style and I adore it. My favorite line (so far!) would have to be "The circle dispersed as the purple cloak dissolved. 'I will bring her home'" You have flowery word choices and it really paints the picture for the reader; your imagery is some of the best I've read on the site! Please keep writing because you are truly wonderful at it!

<3 This is wonderful. I love the way you write. It draws me in. I can't wait for the next update!

I love it :) as always you make the story play like a movie or read like a comic book. I love this story so much

@ Rockett
Thanks for the comment and the subscription. I'll be sure to fix "steal"

I like it so far :) You write fairly well and i like where i think this is going :) Just one thing. You spelled "Steal" instead of "Steel"
Im subscribing :)