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I love this story! Update soon?

Now I'm hungry again...that was mean...but beautifully written.

I can't. I just can't. I love Jess and her family. And it's just. AKSDJHLSAKJDHASHSDKJLSDDJASDJKHSAJKHADS. I CANNOT HANDLE THIS. YOU ARE A BEAUTIFUL PERSON AND I LOVE YOU AND I JUST HAVE NO MORE WORDS TO GIVE YOU RIGHT NOW I'M SORRY. YOU'VE LEFT ME SPEECHLESS AND I CAN'T. I LOVE YOU.

I absolutely love Jess's family. Can I have what they had for dinner? It sounds delicious. But Jess is one of those characters we can relate to since we are all just like her with stories of our own that we want people to see, though I doubt any of the 1D guys will ever read one of our stories but whatever. Love this and please update soon.

I did not beg. I pleaded. There's a difference.

Ditto Micah there.

THANK YOU!

OH MY GOSH.

I FEEL LIKE I AM JESS. WHAT IS LIFE?!?

Oh my god. *giggles* love. Love love lovelovelovelocelovelovelove. Too much love. I want more. Can I have more? Please can I have more?

OHMIGOD YES. IT'S THIS ONE! I'M A GO ACTUALLY READ IT NOW.

Asdfghjkl; I love this chapter, I love this story!

that feeling you get when Mibba says you're not subscirbed to this, but you were when you read the first chapter -.-' oh well, hopefully this time my subscribtion will stick.. hmm.. still liking it and it's still interesting.. hmm.. wondering what you'll do with it as it goes along.. good chapter

I LOVE BACON AND LOUIS AND NOW I LOVE JESS AND I CANT WAIT.
And I have to say, I LOVED LOVED LOVED the chapter in Louis' Pov! You've definitely done his humor justice and I feel like I was actually listening to a conversation they would have! I don't even know. And then then the bacon police and angry zayn and omg. I just. What even.
I love you.
And everything you stand for.
Rebellion against the Capitol.
No wait.
That's not right.
Anyways. I can already tell I'm going to love this. Mainly because I already DO love this.
But seriously. Omg. I'm so ready for this story. You don't even know.
I love you.
KBye.

It has been amazing so far! :) cant wait for the next one!

bacon!
i love bacon.
and this story. it's great.

"Son just take the bacon to go" omygosh this line had me dying. <333

Ou god!! This is tooo funny!! I love it! And it's your failt that we have freakishly high expectations!! You're a freaking azing writer

not too shabby.
i await the update!

I love it already! The concept is wonderful. & on a side note ---> you totally stole my GIF. ;)

Oh my god...Jess totally sounds like me. "This is only my sixth." Holy crumbuckets. That's so funny to me. And good lord. I just love this concept so stinking much :) I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE, YOU LOVELY, AWESOME WOMAN! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU! I reread Something like fate and I remembered how beautiful it was and how much I love her :)

Dude.. You just started the story. If people expect drama and action from the start and still get an awesome story, they are demanding too much ^^ hmm.. Sounding like an Intersting story and the first chapter is a good start for it. Subscribing and looking forward to more.

GGEEEEEEZZ!! You could've sent me the link...I would've fallen in love earlier