Monster - Comments

Interesting character development. I really like that there's an obvious contrast between Kaeira and Hellu; almost like looking at a mirror image. Maliciousness is clearly presented when Hellu speaks, and you can almost feel the omnipresence.

I liked this. The way you added a personality for her voice made it more interesting. The story is mostly realistic, and you captured the personality of Brian very well. Interesting name choice, by the way. I really liked the ending. The way you made monster one of the last words was a very good way to end it.