Chill - Comments

:) so.. You come here often? I love this story, honestly I do.

I think Logan is too awkward! ^^ I can't help but get the impression that he cares too much about what other people might think.. He likes Allie but his reputation is standing in the way.. :/

Awww I kinda feel sorry for Allie you know cuse he is like oh wait for me then he doesnt like say anything then he runs off ... poor Allie

but on the upside it was a good update ^-^ still loving the story :) i might have to re-read the thing as a whole at somepoint :) and Great job with it :)

Update please

UPDATE SOON OMG

I cannot wait for the next update ... i really want to know why her heart dropped ... whats he going to do.
you're such a talented writer and always put in enough to make people want to read more and more

Continue the story!

OH. MY. GOD. This is sooooo AWESOME!!!! I can't wait for the update!

Amazing <3

everytime i come on my laptop i look in my emails to see if theres been an update and when there is i come straight here to read it cuse this is such an epic story, i could read it over and over, cant wait till its out on the bookstore shelves and everything,
least logan is sorta lightening up in school i mean he did smile (even if there was no-one (of signifigance around)).
I love it and even if your updates are late cuse of college (i know its crazy) please just dont stop updating cuse this story is so amazing.

He cares too much for his reputation. :/

Got an email probably 10 minutes ago, stopped studying for college midterms just to read this.... did I mention I'm addicted? :) SO SO good. Trust me I get how busy you must be lol but update like now? This story gives me chills!!!!!

I just read this chapter and wow im addicted please you have to give us more your so talented, if and when you finish and please publish this book, i just feel like im going to do a Allie and end up in a coffee shop in a little corner reading this book over and over and i love Allie's character so much. Cant wait for more your an amazing writer :)

Psssh! Because deep down he knows that he is attracted to her and doesn't want to give a bad impression...? :)) but his reputation seems rather important to him... 

Okay, so I just got caught up and I am OBSESSED! I don't say that often so honestly, it means something. The writing is FANTASTIC, the story is incredible and I just get so sucked in I can't stop. I love Allie and I love Logan and I hope it works out but it seems like its going to be hard because he clearly cares more about his popularity than a sweet girl. I can so relate to Allie and I love love love that, gives me hope for my own Logan ;) haha. You are so talented and I can't wait to read more!!!!!!

You're an incredible writer. You have a real talent.

Awe, I feel bad for Allie.

Alright, first thing I'll say is that this story is quite cliche. I do really like it though, aha. I love the fact that your chapters are rather short, I find it really hard to focus on the story when the chapters are huge and long. That being said, I feel like because the chapters were so short you didn't go into much detail about anything. You kind of just showed the situation and not a whole lot more than that. You kind of have to find a balance there.

I really like how relatable Allie is though. If you can't relate to the fact that she's constantly bullied, you can relate to her friendships or her relationships (or lack thereof) or the fact that she uses books to escape like. I've always found it hard to make characters super relatable, but you've done it really well here.

You have a good story here, and it has tons of potential. Good luck with the rest! :)

I love this story! I like the style of writing you used. It works well with this story.

Also, my name is Marissa too! I don't usually see it used in stories often haha :p

Doesn't she feel somewhat betrayed by her own friend? That she joined the cheerleaders. Fine, she's happy there but when the cheerleader made her life horrible would a friend join them? Ôô

Doesn't she feel somewhat betrayed by her own friend? That she joined the cheerleaders. Fine, she's happy there but when the cheerleader made her life horrible would a friend join them? Ôô