It's Either War or Peace - Comments

@ partyhostile.
Gracias so much :D

Ooh, I like this! It's really good.
My only problem is the layout, it's a bit too bland for my taste, but that's just me!
I like how you combined Percy Jackson and Twilight [even though I've never been huge with either fandom] and meshed them both into a fan fiction. I like it, you've done good!

This is insane- in a totally good way The whole idea of combining twilight and Percy Jackson into some mega awesome insane fan fiction is simply pure genius The mood so far is pretty dark which surprises me after reading the description and it's very well written. I'll be subscribing

bootyful keep writin qurl <3

@ domi823
No problem! ^.^

@ Robin 'The Sidekick'
Thank you so much :D

This is crazy. :o Sorry it took me so long to get to your story. But this is just great. I really liked it. I don't like twilight and have never seen the percy jackson thing. But it was kind of crazy. Def, original. And even though the first chapter was short, it was great. I enjoyed it.

Excellent! You can feel the tension coming off the page. Sorry I'm on to reading Chapter 8 XD

Amazing chapter, as always! I love the suspense that's just building. By the way, I love that you used lyrics from an Evanescence song x3

I really like this. I'm not a huge fan of the Twilight Saga, but you turn the outrageousness into pure genius. I'm a huge fan of the PJATO series, so that makes me even more interested. I expect great things from you both. -A

I thought it was well-written and very dark. You nailed the atmosphere really well. The only thing I didn't understand was sometimes how the plot would unfold, or maybe a character's motive. But all in all, I liked it (: Maybe it's the birthday magic (;