Oh, Is It Love? - Comments

ummm. sorry i haven't updated. -_- school is crazy ya'll. any feedback? why do you guys like/hate the story so far? i have so many ideas...i've been writing them down!

Ding!!! Hi peoples. So, school is over tomorrow, which means i start writing on Sunday.. :D I have so many ideas for this story it's not even that funny. Wee. If you have any questions don't be afraid to message me!

The next chapter should be up soon I promise! School has just been a little crazy. :)

Okay. I hope you guys like the new background. You must hide the comments so it can be seen fully. I thought it was pretty haha!

In love with this story already! The font is a little on the small size and kind makes it tricky to read sometimes. I would suggest just bumping it up a font size.

This is definitely a well written story, keep the story coming.

Woah! You just can't leave it there?! Why do you care Phelps? I mean, I'm sure you have your reasons, but please do share. Insisting you heal her wound, which is actually quite sweet of you Mr. Phelps. If anything, seeing as how you're annoyed of her, I expected you to well, hate her or maybe laugh at her misfortune, but I don't think your heartless. Anyways, Lochte is a fun date, he's a great guy, has his moments, but a great guy. I really love how you incorporate all the swimmers her and you stay true to who are close and stuff. I mean we obviously don't know who's close and stuff, but I'm glad you made the guys all close. I really like how Michael tended to her wound. I laughed so loud when he ignored the phone call saying he knows his mom's ringtone. Makes me wonder what his mom's ringtone is. Anyways, that scene was really good, one of my faves so far, it's kind of the beginning and I don't know, I really like how she's not fazed by his name, she kind of just eh. And how she's saying she's a stranger and he's helping her.

Her date with Nathan was so adorable. I honestly imagine Nathan to be just like that. It was super freaking cute. Nathan is just an awesome guy, his personality really shines and I think in your story you make us really fall for his character cause he's the sweet, caring, nice guy and he's like looking out for her. Taking her out on dates, he even got someone to go with her cause he couldn't. How adorable. And how he's saying he would visit her, ugh, I'm definitely looking forward to see what happens to them. In the first chapter, he was really looking out for her and same with Lochte, such a flirt he is.

And Soni and her relationship is freaking amazing. Wish I had a friendship like that. You could definitely tell they don't need to see each other to maintain their friendship. You can tell they are very close and it makes me like the story so much more and how Rebecca talks about her and like the whole swim team is happy to finally meet her.

I like Leila. Her personality, she's strong, funny, and like I don't know how to describe, but I really like her. And I feel like she challenges Michael in some ways. Because you know, everyone tries to understands how he feels and how he's the best olympian ever for winning so many medals. And like to him, that's a daily thing or something an dhe doesn't understand how for us normal people, like Leila its inspiring, what he does and stuff.

Lovely story as usual! I cannot wait for your next update! MORE :D

Love Michael Phelps!!
This looks like it's going to be a great story.
Interested to see what will happen :)
Definitely subscribing! :)

It is full of a bunch of ideas. Don't you worry your pretty litrle head! :)

I really liked it! It seems kind of different from other Mike's fanfictions that I've already read :). So yeah, I wish you lots of inspiration and I hope your head is full of ideas, 'cause I want more more more! :) xx