Haha all is good, well it's a pretty good job since it's entirely typed up on your phone. But yes, giving it that little extra 'umph' with the typo correction is going to make a world of difference. I am looking forward to read what is going to come in the next update. Keep up the good work!
It's a nice story and I would believe the age. Though I have to say there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes that take away from the story. But a simple read over would fix that up.
No they're like Molly is 19 and jack is 20 I believe lol is that too young? I can change it if it is. I didn't wanna deal with the whole job and college and living with parents thing.
aww okay this is cute <3 how old are they in this story? Please dont say their like 18 cause 18 year old jack shouldnt have a baby in his care full time lol