Forget Regret - Comments

@ rizzoabby
My goodness, thank you so so so much! You're very kind, I'm happy you enjoyed it :)

Wow this is so well written! I absolutely loved this story. The plot seemed really natural and flowed really well. You are a great writer!

@ Draconia
Really? Oh my Goodness, thank you sweetheart!
I have missed you to bits! How are you?

I really enjoyed this story. I must compliment you on you're writing. You have really improved.

@ cherlotz
Hello there :D
Thank you so much for your compliments, they mean a lot :)
I am working a bit on a few stories that might end up being short, at least some of them were conceived for that but not all will have smut, that's the big difference.
I hope that you like them :D

It's different from the other Tom fanfics I've read and this is simply classy and fantastic. Well, I prefer short stories more than the long stories that are often 10 chapters and more longer. How about having Tom in different situation, different personality, different everything perhaps? I'm hoping to read more of your fanfics soon. More power! :)

@ teenagedream91
I know, I was a bit frowny myself but a month had pasted and I wanted them to say 'I love you'. I'm too cheesy and lame, I know xD
Yes, I've had a couple of ideas that aren't enough for a 20 chapter or so story but that can have 5 parts :)

Excellent ending and I love a flustered Eliora, I as a bit skeptical how quick things moved but this is a short story and had to keep reminding myself of that. I enjoyed it and you are going to write more? Well then lol bring them on. I can't wait to see what happens in those other stories you have.

For your first smut it's pretty good you should add more smells and what they are looking at in description like her eyes staring at the wall in amazement as she felt him moving in and out of her, his musky smell was intoxicating as she inhaled deeply once more to grasp the scent.
I can't wait for the epilogue my dear

You're welcome darling :) I see that you made a nice transition to the smut. Very good indeed and I like how Tom isn't as frail as he seems, he has more character in this chapter and more comfortable in the court than off it. It was sweet of Tom to do such a nice thing for Eliora and putting the moves on her already, great job Hiddles! Eliora does seem like the serious type, we'll see how the smut plays out

There were a few mistakes here and there nothing major. Km just wondering what line of work Tom specializes in since all lawyers specialize in something. They are given cases that are represented in their field so I am assuming hes a divorce lawyer or work with cases similair to family and such. Eliora is brilliant with how she handles things. I wonder how you are going to shift this serious enviornment to smutty goodness lol. Cant wait for the next chapter