This is so cute. The introduction was eye-catching, as you went straight to the point. I loved how this starred male-leads in such a love-sick story. The dilemma and dialogue is funny, and caught a few giggles from me, but like 'the dalliance.' said, too much dialogue can be bad. Otherwise, I found the story interesting, and I'm sure many will enjoy reading it.
June 30th, 2013 at 12:39am