Swallow Your Sleep - Comments

Lovely and beautiful and the song fit so perfectly (and I have no words, as usual).

I just. Love. So beautiful. I can just...feel for Ryan. Please update (I know this isn't constructive, but dear god -- there is nothing I can say that will sum up how I feel about this).

you should write more becuase this is really good

God, I wish you would update this.

Beautifully written

"They just. They fit, together. Ryan had always been the extra piece."
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Gah. Okay. Beautiful.

"But they didn’t. He didn’t eat, he didn’t shower, and he couldn’t get past that fucking multi-sylabelled line." Quite possibly the saddest line I've ever read. I love this.

amazing :) love your descriptive powers and use of metaphor

Hello, I found your story via comment, but regardless really enjoyed your story. When I saw that it was a Panic! At The Disco story, I knew i'd love it, since i can never seem to find any good ones here. Your story was not the case. I thought everything was good, right down to the backround, to the summary, to the grammar, everything was great. You are a very talented writer, and I will definetly read whatever else you put out. Good Job with everything! :)

there better me more, there has to me more because this is so good and you can't just leave it there and not write more.
um yeah (: