Hello, I found your story via comment swap. :) That being said, first off, I just want to say that i had a little problem with your backround, and wasnt able to view chapter one, until i turned it to the default layout or whatever its called, haha, that being said, I dont know if that's just my computer. Besides that, I thought your story was good. Minus a few problems, such as capitalizing every word, I thought everything was good, and I cant wait to read whatever else you put out,:)
September 4th, 2012 at 05:28am