That's weird, it shows up like that on my computer... And I did do spell check. Thanks for the heads up. I'll have to see what's going on with my settings. Thanks.
August 26th, 2012 at 05:04am
The layout for this story makes it super hard to read - you might want to think of using another.
I think you need to look at creating more of a picture with your writing. It seems pretty basic right now and pretty boring. I'm sorry but that's the truth. You also need to layout your story correctly like this:
"Shh, Audrey, don't try and move." He gently brushes his hand against my cheek.
"Gerard?" I cry, I am so confused.
"You're okay. You're safe now. I promise."
You should work on creating longer chapters and also on your grammar and spelling.