Under the risk of sounding very ignorant, I don't know who Elanor Rigby is/was (familiar name, just unsure who exactly. Also I'm not American so that's my excuse.) I enjoyed reading this, seems like she's just going through something very raw. I really like your descriptions. I noticed a couple of small mistakes but you can easily get it proofread! Good job!
I enjoyed reading this, seems like she's just going through something very raw. I really like your descriptions. I noticed a couple of small mistakes but you can easily get it proofread!
Good job!