Star Cursed. - Comments

This is very cool.

I really like this, its different but yet as you said the student/teacher vibe. Yup totally subscribing. :)
Update soon, I hope?
- Jenn.

I really like this, its different but yet as you said the student/teacher vibe. Yup totally subscribing. :)
Update soon, I hope?
- Jenn.

It Shows How To Do Italics Here http://www.mibba.com/Forums/Topic/149387/New-BBcodes/
I Just Recently Learned From That For My Stories
Loving The Story By The Way
I Can't Wait For More!

@ Lithium_Sorrows
@ Beavis.
@ become1again
@ forever young;

Sorry I just realised what the deal with the @ symbol is... I'd seen it around but I didn't know it comes up automatically when you hit reply and I wasnt actually linking anyone before... durr! Clever me... =P

@Beavis.
Thank you so much!! Its so great to hear that someone likes the style of your writing as well as the content! =D

@become1again
Thank you!!!!
On the way I promise! =D

@forever young;
Ah thank you!!! I really appreciate the feedback! Especially when its so nice and makes me all warm and fuzzy inside! =P

Thank you all of you guys!! This means so much to me, you have no idea!!
Can't stop smiling like an idiot right now! You guys just made my week!
I should have next chapter up by tomorrow and it should be a fairly decent length too!

@Lithium_Sorrows

Thank you so much!
Also love your tagline, Our Lady is my all time favourite MCR song! ;]

Howdy, I'm from comment swap and I am here to give my two cents.

First of all, you do NOT need to apologize for being rusty. The hook was brilliant. It got me - well, hooked. Paragraph two is wonderful.

"Flocks of scantily clad girls faltered along cracked pavements in their heels ... " I adore this line. Your writing style is fantastic. '

You have very nice word choice. Your voice is really strong. I'm definitely subscribing. Good luck and happy writing, keep up the good work!

*finishes and holds out hands* MORE PLEASE

This is very very good so far. I think you have a really creative style in writing, and I really like what you've done with the story's plot. Dont stops writing! I see this this turning into something great:)

-EmmXOXO

I really like the looks of this I subbed