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  • NekoPower

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    This is very cool.
    August 28th, 2012 at 07:43am
  • YoungandLoadedKid

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    I really like this, its different but yet as you said the student/teacher vibe. Yup totally subscribing. :)
    Update soon, I hope?
    - Jenn.
    August 28th, 2012 at 06:16am
  • YoungandLoadedKid

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    I really like this, its different but yet as you said the student/teacher vibe. Yup totally subscribing. :)
    Update soon, I hope?
    - Jenn.
    August 28th, 2012 at 06:16am
  • PearyBear

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    It Shows How To Do Italics Here http://www.mibba.com/Forums/Topic/149387/New-BBcodes/
    I Just Recently Learned From That For My Stories
    Loving The Story By The Way
    I Can't Wait For More! Smile
    August 28th, 2012 at 04:02am
  • Blondage

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    @ Lithium_Sorrows
    @ Beavis.
    @ become1again
    @ forever young;

    Sorry I just realised what the deal with the @ symbol is... I'd seen it around but I didn't know it comes up automatically when you hit reply and I wasnt actually linking anyone before... durr! Clever me... =P
    August 26th, 2012 at 03:39am
  • Blondage

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    @Beavis.
    Thank you so much!! Its so great to hear that someone likes the style of your writing as well as the content! =D

    @become1again
    Thank you!!!!
    On the way I promise! =D

    @forever young;
    Ah thank you!!! I really appreciate the feedback! Especially when its so nice and makes me all warm and fuzzy inside! =P

    Thank you all of you guys!! This means so much to me, you have no idea!!
    Can't stop smiling like an idiot right now! You guys just made my week!
    I should have next chapter up by tomorrow and it should be a fairly decent length too!
    August 26th, 2012 at 03:34am
  • Blondage

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    @Lithium_Sorrows

    Thank you so much!
    Also love your tagline, Our Lady is my all time favourite MCR song! ;]
    August 26th, 2012 at 03:27am
  • femme fatale.

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    Howdy, I'm from comment swap and I am here to give my two cents.

    First of all, you do NOT need to apologize for being rusty. The hook was brilliant. It got me - well, hooked. Paragraph two is wonderful.

    "Flocks of scantily clad girls faltered along cracked pavements in their heels ... " I adore this line. Your writing style is fantastic. '

    You have very nice word choice. Your voice is really strong. I'm definitely subscribing. Good luck and happy writing, keep up the good work!
    August 24th, 2012 at 05:16am
  • become1again

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    *finishes and holds out hands* MORE PLEASE
    August 24th, 2012 at 12:13am
  • Beavis.

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    This is very very good so far. I think you have a really creative style in writing, and I really like what you've done with the story's plot. Dont stops writing! I see this this turning into something great:)

    -EmmXOXO
    August 23rd, 2012 at 01:48pm
  • Lithium_Sorrows

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    I really like the looks of this I subbed
    August 23rd, 2012 at 01:46pm
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