Did you hear that? Don't worry, it was only MY HEART SHATTERING INTO A MILLION PIECES. Oh my God though, are these tears? I think so. This is wonderful and saddening, but I love it so much uggh<333
September 3rd, 2012 at 12:13am
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Ok, you just broke my heart! </3
So I'm here from Comment Swap and I was a little skeptical when I first started reading it cause I was like ok, another 1D fanfic. But I actually really liked it! I like how you flash back to different memories. I think that's really cute :) I love when he said the whole "you don't know you're beautiful" line. I was like "Ha, song reference!"
Anyways, this was really cute and I really liked the flow of it. You have a couple of spelling errors here and there, but they are fairly tiny and unnoticeable. When I first saw your layout, I loved it, but then I found it was kind of hard to read the chapters with the green background. You might want to fix that to make it easier to read.
But other than that, absolutely loved it, even though it broke my heart. Can't wait to see where you take this story next! :)