My One True Love, My Best Friend - Comments

  • m0riarty

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    I'm crying my face off right now. I was already crying, then Don't You Ever Forget About Me by Sleeping With Sirens came on. my. fucking. feels. god
    February 15th, 2013 at 05:28pm
  • LadyPikachu

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    That was beautiful. Completely beautiful. I sit here writing this, crying and smiling all at the same time, because yes, it was sad, but you could feel the love between them in every word.
    God, that was beautiful. Amazing.
    August 28th, 2012 at 09:46pm
  • hannahsings9752

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    Wow. That made me smile and cry at the same time, I liked it a lot. Poor Jacky and Lex :'( You're a very good writer, the letter practically broke my heart and i had to actually remind myself that it wasn't real haha, keep writing, i look forward to another wonderfully written Jalex fic :)
    August 27th, 2012 at 01:52am
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    This was a really well done and moving piece. Though I can't say I'm a fan of all of the swearing, but hey, to each his own, right? I only noticed a couple of spelling errors here and there but nothing too serious or noticeable.
    I really liked how you played out the memory flash backs by Alex looking at the different things in the apartment and remembering the different stories behind each of them. I really liked that. I thought it was cute.
    One thing that I didn't understand is how did Jack die? It couldn't have been a crash or anything because then how could he have written the note? I was thinking maybe cancer or something? I don't know :s
    But anyways, great job. You should be proud of this piece :)
    August 25th, 2012 at 04:46pm