Right Where You Want Me - Comments

Grrrrrrr...I hate Mike right now. Cheli does NOT deserve to get cheated on no matter how badly he wanted to have sex! I mean, she trusted him & we all know that she'll find out somehow. I mean, what if this skank goes & brags about it on the internet. I'm sure somehow Cheli will find out about it!
I'm totally looking forward to the next update!

I stumbled across this and I love it! For one Mike is a complete asshole! I mean since he finds out that Cheli is not going to have sex with him because she is waiting to be married for her to finally get intimate with him. I don't think he gets what he did just now is he betrayed everything that Cheli put in him. She trusted him enough to not let his eyes wonder to other girls because she isn't going to give him any. He should respect her decision not just blow things out of proposition. I know their relationship will start to crumble because one lie will become countless more and Cheli will find out about his affair. I look forward to the next update and hope it's soon!

i cant wait to see what happens next..

Wow, this story is really interesting. I can't wait until the next update! I really wanna know if Mike can handle it for a little while longer :)

Yay! Good Job :D
I can't wait for more.

I can't wait for this :)