This Innocence Is Brilliant - Comments

kierstlovesyou (100)

:: Member
Gender:: ♀
Age:: 32
Location:: United States

Love it :)

September 10th, 2012 at 11:45pm

Lawliet. (100)

:: Member
Gender:: ♀
Age:: 25
Location:: United States

oooh this story sounds really cool! I think she might have cancer... i don't know though. haha update soon! :)

September 10th, 2012 at 03:57am

Adleigh_Lynn212 (100)

:: Member
Gender:: ♀
Age:: 31
Location:: United States

I'm really curious to see how everything unfolds.I don't know if she has cancer or not but she is sick.How long has it been since she last saw the guys?I was just wondering if this was now current time so two years later or not.I'm excited/nervous to see what happends when she meets the guys again.Update soon please?:)

September 10th, 2012 at 02:00am

littlemisslonely (100)

:: Member
Gender:: ♀
Age:: 31
Location:: United States

I like this. :) However there were a few spelling/grammar errors, those I did not like. But I seriously love this idea. Can't wait for more! :) (Sorry if I seem rude, that was not my intention)

August 24th, 2012 at 01:30am

be nice (100)

:: Member
Gender:: ♀
Age:: 27
Location:: United States

I like Fate's character and the idea is really great! I can't wait to see where the story goes! Keep up the good work!

August 24th, 2012 at 12:38am

My Guardian Angel (100)

:: Member
Gender:: ♀
Age:: 27
Location:: Great Britain (UK)

I really like this idea :) Update more pretty pretty please with a cherry on top :D

August 24th, 2012 at 12:17am