This Innocence Is Brilliant - Comments

Love it :)

oooh this story sounds really cool! I think she might have cancer... i don't know though. haha update soon! :)

I'm really curious to see how everything unfolds.I don't know if she has cancer or not but she is sick.How long has it been since she last saw the guys?I was just wondering if this was now current time so two years later or not.I'm excited/nervous to see what happends when she meets the guys again.Update soon please?:)

I like this. :) However there were a few spelling/grammar errors, those I did not like. But I seriously love this idea. Can't wait for more! :) (Sorry if I seem rude, that was not my intention)

I like Fate's character and the idea is really great! I can't wait to see where the story goes! Keep up the good work!

I really like this idea :) Update more pretty pretty please with a cherry on top :D