Cigarettes and Chocolate - Comments

XD! >.<

so i have to say this is the most amazing story ive read so far on this site and im deff subscribing and recommending, but my only suggestion is that you go back and re-read it before you post. don't get me wrong i love this story, but i did have to mentally edit and rearrange the words a little. normally id just say "nah, ill go read something else." but your story is amazing and i do love the idea

Wow... this world truly is blessed to have some one as creative as you. I'm now gonna sit in a hole and pout cause I'll never be as awesome as you... lol. Jk... about the hole, the rest is serious... Update soon?

This story is very interesting so far and I love it. Can't wait to read more ♥