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  • urjustasadsong12

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    I liked how you flashed back to Cady and Matt's first kiss. Thatwas so cuteee. =D Ahh, MATT?! Why is he there?!?! While she's snooping on Brian's computerrrr? And why is that even on his computer? So many questions...

    Great update though. I am on the edge of my seat. THE EDGE!
    June 30th, 2008 at 03:23pm
  • A7Xmcs

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    Why does Bri have that vid if he wasn't around? And, what in the hell is Matt doing there? And I thought that I had twists and turns in my story....oh, hell no. You've got them, too.

    The voice...I love the voice. The voice cracks me up every time.
    June 30th, 2008 at 05:22am
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    Oooer.
    What with the video on Brian's computer.
    SUSPICIOUS, MUCH?
    And Matt's always around.
    Eeesh. I don't like the fact he moved onto Val so quickly :|
    June 29th, 2008 at 09:50pm
  • A7Xmcs

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    Like the new layout...and the tatt design. That's really unique...

    And, ah for memories. I was wondering how they met and so forth. Great chapter...mudball. Sounds like fun to be had.

    But wait--should she be remembering Matt or should she be concentrating on a hot as hell Brian all dirty and so forth? Don't know how I feel about who I think she should be with. Sad, I know. Great update!
    June 29th, 2008 at 08:34am
  • bloodravyn

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    loved!
    June 29th, 2008 at 02:28am
  • Beautiful Loser

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    Thankies!!!!
    they're so sweet together!!!
    June 28th, 2008 at 05:57pm
  • urjustasadsong12

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    Wow, that was a very quick update. Yay for not having to wait long! lol
    Anyways, haha an intercom system would definitely be useful. XD
    That kind of reminds me of something that would happen in Scrubs.
    Like JD imagining this whole intricate intercom system in his house or something.
    ANYWAYs, great update. =D I want her to be with Briiian!!
    June 27th, 2008 at 06:30pm
  • A7Xmcs

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    Yay for chemistry between her and Brian...cute chapter...but I'm still confused about who I think she should be with. Her and Matt were so volitile, but her and Brian are so docile. I just don't know which way to swing. I needed this type of chapter, but I'm still confused. lol Of course, that's what I get for being blonde. =p
    June 27th, 2008 at 04:17pm
  • A7Xmcs

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    So, I stumbled across this story first, went back to read Lost Cause and finished it and then caught up on this one. I love your writing style. I laughed a lot which is always nice. Cady cracks me up with her thinking. Her refreshing look at life...it's nice to know (even if she is fictional) that someone else talks in her head to herself and o occasionaly acts a little crazed. It's all good. As far as her little pickle of a problem...I don't know which way to swing. Brian or Matt...that's a toughie. But, as far as the last chapter left off, no way should she do that.
    June 27th, 2008 at 03:32am
  • Beautiful Loser

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    pleaseeeee!
    She can't die!
    The 2 updates are class!!!!!!
    They make me feel better!
    Thank you!!!
    June 26th, 2008 at 04:21pm
  • bloodravyn

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    she can't do that!!
    June 26th, 2008 at 03:16am
  • Non_Cherie

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    sure, sure.
    no suicide for Cady.
    unless things go horribly wrong...
    then MAYBE...
    but there's a whole lot more story before that could even be possible, so meh.

    who knows?
    oh yeah... i do.
    *knowing smile*
    June 26th, 2008 at 02:03am
  • urjustasadsong12

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    *pokes with stick*
    You better write some moreee. =D
    And NO SUICIDE FOR CADY!
    June 26th, 2008 at 01:02am
  • Demon Ninja

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    Cady death would be baaaaaaaad....
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    MORE!!
    *tackles you*
    June 9th, 2008 at 07:25pm
  • urjustasadsong12

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    Nuuu!! Don't collapse Cady!! Hah, great upateee. =D Super awesomeee.
    June 9th, 2008 at 02:19am
  • almost.easy

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    YAY!!!
    you've updated!!

    i loved the update!! :D
    very awesome!!
    June 8th, 2008 at 02:28pm
  • Non_Cherie

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    wowsies...
    she's slowly going insane...
    anywhos...
    WRITE MORE BITCH!!!!
    Smiley
    ... i AM!
    and yes, she's insane. that's the point, DUH!
    May 21st, 2008 at 05:12am
  • Demon Ninja

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    wowsies...
    she's slowly going insane...
    anywhos...
    WRITE MORE BITCH!!!!
    Smiley
    May 21st, 2008 at 01:48am
  • anie-vi

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    Told you i would love it!
    May 20th, 2008 at 05:22pm
  • Beautiful Loser

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    *pokes for more*
    It's great!!!
    XD
    May 18th, 2008 at 09:07pm
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