I'm loving this! Like... a lot! Heh.. don't be surprised if I ask your story to the next dance xD ...Well, maybe not.... That's just a figure of speech... But anyywhoo... UPDATEYEY SOONEY! oXoXoOxOx Detts
It's really good! I like to think the Doms aren't as hard shelled as they seem to be. Like, not by much, but I like to think they'd all have just one thing that'd really get them. Like it could be art or music or whatever, but just one thing that they'd never let anyone know about, but that got them.
@ RainbowsEnd I kinda thought that. I can't really pick out any mistakes which is great, message me anytime if you want advice on absolutely anything! Ahaha thank you! I love it aswell:)
@ FrankYouForTheVenom I don't exactly need a beta, but some advice would be nice as well :) The chapter should be up tonight or tomorrow! (BTW I love your username)
@ Scene_Queen_98 Yep I shall be updating yep. I just need to finish up the chapter real quick and then hand it on to my beta. It should be up by either tonight or tomorrow.