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  • JickNonas

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    LOVE You Me at Six! I also like the gifs you used to introduce your characters! I do really like this! I think you're a good writer and you definitely hooked me with the first chapter! Keep updating please :D
    December 8th, 2016 at 09:53pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    This was good, I don't know who this band is and I don't usually read band fics but it was kinda cool. I liked the layout because it was plain and simple but made it look nice and stand out.

    And I like the way you write because it was easy to understand and read so well done
    April 6th, 2016 at 12:13am
  • stilinski;

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    band fics are my absolute favorite, and the fact you used my favorite band made me very happy and drew me in immediately.

    The description is good, and made me want to keep reading, and the opening chapter was wonderful as well. I'm sad to see that this story isn't updated very often because i would like to keep up with it.
    April 1st, 2014 at 06:58pm
  • Arablest

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    I'm not usually a fan of band fics, but this one caught my attention. I didn't really know this was a band fic till I actually re-read the summary. For some reason that just didn't register.

    Moving on, I liked that the opening chapter wasn't very cliched. With the girl showing interest in a guy for a change. That said, I'll say that after that first chapter I didn't go on since this story doesn't seem to be updated regularly.
    December 5th, 2013 at 01:23am
  • Arablest

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    I'm not usually a fan of band fics, but this one caught my attention. I didn't really know this was a band fic till I actually re-read the summary. For some reason that just didn't register.

    Moving on, I liked that the opening chapter wasn't very cliched. With the girl showing interest in a guy for a change. That said, I'll say that after that first chapter I didn't go on since this story doesn't seem to be updated regularly.
    December 5th, 2013 at 01:23am
  • Arablest

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    I'm not usually a fan of band fics, but this one caught my attention. I didn't really know this was a band fic till I actually re-read the summary. For some reason that just didn't register.

    Moving on, I liked that the opening chapter wasn't very cliched. With the girl showing interest in a guy for a change. That said, I'll say that after that first chapter I didn't go on since this story doesn't seem to be updated regularly.
    December 5th, 2013 at 01:23am
  • spiderman

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    Just found this story and I seriously love it, please update soon! :D
    August 10th, 2013 at 03:06pm
  • goatman

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    You describe things quite vividly, and everything flows very nicely. I didn't catch any grammatical or spelling mistakes while reading, so that's always a plus. The dialogue also flows very smoothly; it seems very believable to me. One thing though- some parts, in my opinion, have a little too much description. It takes away from whats going on, and makes it just a smidge harder to read.
    Great job!
    July 3rd, 2013 at 04:03am
  • XTeamSammiX

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    Once again comment swap gave me a good story.

    I really like this story.(subscribed and recommended) You have amazing detailing in the story, the emotions are relatable, and you don't rush the story-which is a good thing. From chapter two I disliked Marisol, but by the end I absolutely hate that skank. >:o excuse my language. If I was Aubrey I would have already dropped Marisol like the drop of a hat. Anyways, enough of my ranting. Lovely story, can't wait for more.
    April 19th, 2013 at 04:14am
  • AvengedKittenFold

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    For once comment swap gave me something that I really enjoyed. :D
    Your story darling is absolutely wonderful! I love it! I cant wait for Josh to find the right girl to be with * wink wink* Aubrey *wink wink*. Anyhow, keep up the writing love :D
    March 1st, 2013 at 12:19am
  • HopeIsAGift

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    Comment Swap did me a favor :)

    I've only read three chapters so far, but I absolutely love this story! I can relate to Aubrey :P And though I don't care too much for Marisol yet, I'm hoping that she turns out to be a good friend and lets Josh have the right girl! I can't wait to read more! :)
    February 20th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • marshallomnipotence

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    I was really interested in this story, you'r chapters are short and so I just kept reading because I felt like I wasn't getting enough infomation and I just generally wanted to know more. I really like Audrey she feels kind of mysterious to me, but I don't like her friend, she irks me but you characterised her well. Noticed a few minor mistakes in spelling but not muc else. Ugh I love this keep writing!
    December 3rd, 2012 at 03:57am
  • miss nevermind

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    please please please update!!!
    November 19th, 2012 at 09:13pm
  • youmeat69

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    whats even going on i dont understand why donT THEY JUST SAY IT ALREADY
    October 17th, 2012 at 04:44pm
  • miss nevermind

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    oh come on , you cant leave it like that Sad
    October 16th, 2012 at 09:43pm
  • greyeyes-darkskies

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    p.s yes the suspense did work!!!
    October 16th, 2012 at 08:31pm
  • greyeyes-darkskies

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    p.s yes the suspense did work!!!
    October 16th, 2012 at 08:31pm
  • greyeyes-darkskies

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    asdfghjkl i love this so much!!!
    October 16th, 2012 at 08:30pm
  • gore.92

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    yes im suffering please update!!
    October 16th, 2012 at 03:53pm
  • alextmarshall

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    Omfg please update soon!!
    October 16th, 2012 at 06:16am