September 4th, 2012 at 09:52pm
Shallow Graves For Shallow Hearts - Comments
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This is great, I loved the ending! Matt's hilarious. I think they're both in the same place, at least from what's been written so far. It's clear she likes him, and I think he likes her but they're both afraid of what the other will say. I can't wait for one of them to come out and say it. This was great! Can't wait for the next update. :)September 1st, 2012 at 06:41pm
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@ lolcat
Just to clarify, it's second person. :)
But I loved the update, and I kind of want to find out more about what happened on Matt's date. The ending was adorable. :3September 1st, 2012 at 12:16am -
i like how you're writing in third person (is this third person? i'm failing english, whatver) because it makes me feel like i'm the girl and i'm in love with flyzick so it's lovely. that sounded really stalker-ish omfg. anyway, i love this story, it's great :)August 31st, 2012 at 01:11am
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YES! I like this. Her mom's a bitch though. Matthew's silly. I like her a lot. She's cool. I can't wait for more!August 30th, 2012 at 01:20am
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YAY! Another Flyzik fic! I love these! Can'nt wait.for the next update!August 30th, 2012 at 01:02am
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I like where your going with this it's actually different and not what I expected. I'm excited to see what you do with itAugust 30th, 2012 at 12:14am
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I love this! She seems really interesting, I can't wait to read more!August 28th, 2012 at 03:12am
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I still really love this and can't wait for more. :)August 27th, 2012 at 05:38pm
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asjfhkf this is so good! please continue? i can tell its already the start of another perfect story.<3August 26th, 2012 at 05:18am
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I love this already and it's perfect. I can't wait to see where this goes. I'll definitely be reading every update. :)August 26th, 2012 at 05:08am
haha thank you for clarifying :)