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  • luke ham ham.

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    I really like this! This is really good so far!
    Update soon? (:
    October 17th, 2012 at 11:32pm
  • malouagger

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    I liked it and I would like to read more :)
    October 17th, 2012 at 10:02pm
  • MarlboroChic

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    You should write more of this!!! I liked it and I think it's really good :)
    October 9th, 2012 at 11:59am
  • YoungandLoadedKid

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    I'm from comment swap and I kind of have to agree with the other comment. I get that she misses Harry and she's ready to be on her own? But like I don't know, I guess you can change a fee things. I'm not trying to be mean or anything just letting you know that this is kind of all over the place I guess, well to me at least. Lol :)
    But I could be wrong and this could turn out to be a good story.
    September 11th, 2012 at 06:21am
  • LyndsaylurvesLogan

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    Hi, I'm from comment swap. I think you put too little detail into this. Also, I don't really get the point of the story. I mean, I see how Piller and Harry finally meet up after years away from each other.. but the other stuff was just pointless, I'm sorry. Was ALL that stuff necessary?
    September 10th, 2012 at 01:21am
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