@ IamtheUntitled haha I really am glad you enjoy the story!(: don't worry, I love hearing your feedback. Helps me figure out how I should do the next chapter. Much love :D
Very good chapter. Really nicely written. The reader can really feel the tension between the two. It's so interesting. :D I sense drama coming. Super good job! Already excited for next chapter. Please update soon. :)
Mad love - Ashland. xx
(And yes, looks like I'll be that person, that comments on every single update. :P)
There isn't many Alex Koehler stories out there so i was automatically intrigued when i saw this! I read it and it was actually really, really good! mad props to you :) continue this story please! now i'm very interested
NJFANJFKDNBJD, WHAT?!?! Now I'm curious! Very nice chapter, you're really building up some drama. You're not giving very much away about what has happened between the characters, but that really keep the reader interested. I assume there could be more descriptive details (Like the surroundings and her emotions). But all in all still really good. I'm super stoked for next chapter! Please update soon. :)
AHHHH!!! I already love this story! Chelsea seems like a pretty good character and the plot you're starting could turn out really well. I also love how you don't tell what has happened between Alex and her. Plus, your writing style is quiet good. Honestly just really, really stoked about this story! I will deffo be following it closely. Please update soon!