I love Labyrinth! This is a good start to your fanfic but can I suggest that you break up the spacing between dialogue properly? So it's an easier read :)
April 9th, 2014 at 02:09am
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the only criticism i have is that when hoggle speaks, don't put the 'z' on the ends of his wordsApril 24th, 2013 at 09:32pm
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the only criticism i have is that when hoggle speaks, don't put the 'z' on the ends of his wordsApril 24th, 2013 at 09:32pm
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i really like this! i'd love you to update it xx you're a very talented writer.April 24th, 2013 at 09:28pm
