If I Ever Lose You - Comments

oh my. I usually cannot stand fan fiction, espescially ones about one direction, but the description, flawless flow, and overall storyline made me read till the end. So sad :( You have acheived something that most fan fiction writers find very difficult to achieve. You have managed to write about love and one direction without making it so cheesy and cliché that everyone wants to gag. That's great! You have talent as a writer, the only thing I can see that's wrong is: change "Niall meant the world to you" to "Niall meant the world to me." I can see what you are trying to do there, and yes it does make sense but it's really confusing and it would sound better if you changed it to me. I'm sorry if this comment was a bit offensive, because gathering from this story, you are a directioner. I was just expressing my honest opinion :P I hope you took this comment as compliment and praise because that's what is was supposed to mean :)

Oh wow. I was not seeing that coming. This was so good but very sad. great job c:

Okay. Wow, I did not see that coming... first off props to you for even coming up with this! That was all fluff, yet really sad. I can't believe he died, leaving her like that. She seems to be a mess to begin with, bringing herself down within the first 50 words of the oneshot. Awwww, she's going to be smelling that pillow forever now :'( One of the parts that really got me was when the girl was in bed, crying, and wishing that Niall was there. I didn't mention this, mainly because I didn't want to make a brownie points list, but the OC's crying really gets me. I don't know why, but I like it when oneshots have lots of crying in them. That was beautiful and had an uber plot twist. Bravo and thank you for entering! :)

Wow! I'm gonna be honest, I'm not really a one direction fan (comment swap sent me) but this was really good! I wasn't sure how it was gonna end but that's what made it good! I really thought I was gonna cry when the news was on and it was talking about the crash! It was a crazy, unexpected twist which made it really good. The only thing I didn't like was that the girl didn't have a name and that it could be the reader's name. I'd rather a fan fiction have a character that is not the reader, but otherwise it was really good! Keep up the good work!

Omg... this had me in tears. I hate reading stories like this but it was really good! Let's pray that Mr. Horan stays with us forever!:)