How to Be a Heartbreaker - Comments

I'm not used to Sidney Crosby not winning haha...but great story and great characterization with Livia. :)

Man, this was sad but good. I'd love to see a sequel down the line if you'd ever consider it. If not, it was a great one-off!

This was really good!!! :)

Not gonna lie, this story brought tears to my eyes. Especially the line about Jordan. First Max, and now him. I miss the old gang.

I loved this! You write Sid so well, as well as his relationships with the rest of the team. I can totally see Sid waiting all summer but then wanting to make it last.

Loved it!!

Whew...Happy Birthday, Livia! And, in turn, happy birthday to the rest of us! You just keep getting better, Juliet!

woah.

Oh my Goodness!
A friend of mine rec'ed this and I said, wth why not?
And I'm so glad I did!
You are an amazing writer. The transitions between pov's are so smooth they practically don't exist and the whole thing just flows so. freaking. well.
I wish there were more stories like this on here, and more writers like you =P
You have one mistake that I saw: 'brown' instead of 'brow' and your italics from Rule #4 didn't close off properly because you had [i/] not .
Anyway, I will definitely rec this because more people need to read what I just did! <3

Livia's birthday is a gift for us all! So well done! Poignant and sexy as all hell! You write Sid better than anyone I've ever read.
PS: the line about missing Jordan gutted me. I still can't accept that he's gone. (or married for that matter lol)

Awesome. Loved it!

I love it!! Thank you so much :D <3