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  • Alsoldey

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    Oh mu God! I freaking love this! Please please update soon! I love the OC and her ballsy personality, no pardon me, I love that she's so unbalanced. Yeah, I'm not a big fan of Harley Quinn either. So yeah, update soon! I cannot wait to read the next one!
    September 13th, 2012 at 05:57pm
  • JustOneBadDay

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    @ Jar Of Hearts;
    Thanks! I'm not a very big Harley Quinn fan either. In fact, I don't support that abusive relationship between Harley and the Joker at all. That's why I think his wife should stand up for herself. I really, really appreciate your compliments, it's the comments like yours that keeps me going :D
    September 2nd, 2012 at 02:17am
  • JustOneBadDay

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    @ ThatGirlThatWrites16 Thank you so much :)
    September 2nd, 2012 at 02:09am
  • paracosm.

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    This is really excellent.

    I like the idea that The Joker's wife chooses the criminal life as well, and is not a doormat like Harley Quinn. tehe I'm not much of a Harley Quinn fan.

    Anyway, the description is very eloquent, and like ThatGirlThatWrites, the fact that she fought back and taunted her attempted rapist (''You put your finger on the trigger when you're threatening someone, rookie.'') made me laugh a little bit, and also strangely proud.

    The use of vocabulary is brilliant, and makes it sound very sophisticated. Reading it is effortless, I never have to re-read confusing sentences or anything. My eyes just glide over the sentences because all of your descriptions flow so well. I love this story, and only after one chapter, I know it's going to become very popular.
    September 1st, 2012 at 12:07am
  • ThatGirlThatWrites

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    Hell yes(: i love it ! girl power! i cannot wait for more (: Mr. Green this might be my new favorite story!
    August 29th, 2012 at 07:46am