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  • pekigirl

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    @ CharlieHunnam
    yeah exactly =/ I have one story on hiatus and I hate it ahah xD but thanks!!! really! :'D I'm glad you liked this one shot
    September 6th, 2014 at 10:17am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    @ pekigirl
    completely understandable! i would, too...
    i hate starting like six different stories and not being able to finish one. ugh.
    good job, though, babe! you're more than welcome!
    September 6th, 2014 at 04:55am
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    @ CharlieHunnam
    oh my god, thank you so much!!! :'3
    Yeaah I actually thought about it, but I wanted to finish my stories first (Memories Remain and the story The Hardest Part Of Ending Is Starting Again)
    Anyway, thank you for the suggestion and for the comment!!! <3 <3
    September 6th, 2014 at 12:15am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    I agree with ALL of the comments !! this should definitely be a full-length story!! this was intense and i loved it!! really, really good, dear!
    September 5th, 2014 at 10:55pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Amazing!!! This should be a full length story!!!
    July 19th, 2014 at 06:20am
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    Holy crap... how did I not know this existed until now?!?!?!?!?! I LOVED it! This was so hot! I would have never guessed that this was your first one shot! I total agree with the others though, this could be an awesome foundation for a full-length story if you wanted it to be! Again, loved it!!
    December 30th, 2013 at 06:30pm
  • squidgyyo

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    I know it's been a while, but do you think you could maybe add more? Or possibly turn this into a full story???
    November 1st, 2013 at 07:29am
  • Daenerys

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    pure fire! I loved it... I wouldn't mind if you turned this into a real story :D
    keep going!
    August 23rd, 2013 at 02:42pm
  • DreamingCorpse

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    Holy shit... This is your first one-shot?! Jesus, woman. I will now go rummaging through your stories *-*
    August 7th, 2013 at 12:35pm
  • heretic.

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    This is so unf. Really bloody good for your first one-shot! The way you describe him is just.. Pure sex haha. If you did add onto this, I'd read it most definitely!
    August 7th, 2013 at 05:19am
  • DeathToken

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    Amazing! :D I loved it
    April 14th, 2013 at 04:19pm
  • pawnsinplay

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    Can you like...turn this into an actual story? Even if it's short? Because holy LORD, I loved this!
    February 9th, 2013 at 01:20am
  • Mandragora

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    I LOVED IT! This is such a great piece, I can't believe it's your first one-shot, you did great! Also, I am a very big fan of your stories Not Everything is what it seems and The Hardest Part Of Ending Is Starting Again for quite a while (I was just too awkward and shy to comment, sorrry! Wink ) and I have to say that your writing just keeps getting better and better and that if you are planning anything new, you already have a reader, haha

    p.s.: Abby is AWESOME!
    September 9th, 2012 at 10:01pm
  • synful_desires

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    We sure as hell need to get loose once in awhile in life! Haha OMG the beginning was so funny made me laugh so hard! I loved it! I wish I could have a friend just like Abby's! I totally can see a full-length, huh? ^.^
    September 4th, 2012 at 11:46pm
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Are you sure that was your first one-shot? Because it was fricken amazing! <3 I loved it!
    September 3rd, 2012 at 06:27am
  • rarelytiredlights

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    loved thisss :)
    September 2nd, 2012 at 11:14pm
  • MisfitCarter

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    Loved it!!!
    September 2nd, 2012 at 05:02am
  • Maria_Vengeance

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    omg. I need gifs for this comment. Unique. Jesus.
    September 2nd, 2012 at 02:14am
  • gothique4

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    Damn girl that was soooo hot and for your first one shot it was amazing.
    September 2nd, 2012 at 12:29am
  • Vampirelover31

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    can't wait to read it... also is that amanda bynes.. lol... if not, she looks like her
    August 29th, 2012 at 07:36pm
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