Delightful Mistake - Comments

@ CharlieHunnam
yeah exactly =/ I have one story on hiatus and I hate it ahah xD but thanks!!! really! :'D I'm glad you liked this one shot

@ pekigirl
completely understandable! i would, too...
i hate starting like six different stories and not being able to finish one. ugh.
good job, though, babe! you're more than welcome!

@ CharlieHunnam
oh my god, thank you so much!!! :'3
Yeaah I actually thought about it, but I wanted to finish my stories first (Memories Remain and the story The Hardest Part Of Ending Is Starting Again)
Anyway, thank you for the suggestion and for the comment!!! <3 <3

I agree with ALL of the comments !! this should definitely be a full-length story!! this was intense and i loved it!! really, really good, dear!

Amazing!!! This should be a full length story!!!

Holy crap... how did I not know this existed until now?!?!?!?!?! I LOVED it! This was so hot! I would have never guessed that this was your first one shot! I total agree with the others though, this could be an awesome foundation for a full-length story if you wanted it to be! Again, loved it!!

I know it's been a while, but do you think you could maybe add more? Or possibly turn this into a full story???

pure fire! I loved it... I wouldn't mind if you turned this into a real story :D
keep going!

Holy shit... This is your first one-shot?! Jesus, woman. I will now go rummaging through your stories *-*

This is so unf. Really bloody good for your first one-shot! The way you describe him is just.. Pure sex haha. If you did add onto this, I'd read it most definitely!

Amazing! :D I loved it

Can you like...turn this into an actual story? Even if it's short? Because holy LORD, I loved this!

I LOVED IT! This is such a great piece, I can't believe it's your first one-shot, you did great! Also, I am a very big fan of your stories Not Everything is what it seems and The Hardest Part Of Ending Is Starting Again for quite a while (I was just too awkward and shy to comment, sorrry! ) and I have to say that your writing just keeps getting better and better and that if you are planning anything new, you already have a reader, haha

p.s.: Abby is AWESOME!

We sure as hell need to get loose once in awhile in life! Haha OMG the beginning was so funny made me laugh so hard! I loved it! I wish I could have a friend just like Abby's! I totally can see a full-length, huh? ^.^

Are you sure that was your first one-shot? Because it was fricken amazing! <3 I loved it!

loved thisss :)

Loved it!!!

omg. I need gifs for this comment. Unique. Jesus.

Damn girl that was soooo hot and for your first one shot it was amazing.

can't wait to read it... also is that amanda bynes.. lol... if not, she looks like her