Aubrey - Comments

It's a cute layout. <3 This story is quite short, but interesting. It's always cool to read someone's conscience thoughts. My dreams are like movies to me but I tend to forget them almost instantly. It's fine short, but I bet you could get readers to get into this. It's good. :)
Grammar critique:
More "than"
I don't know if it was meant to say 'papers and papers' cause that confused me, unless there were a lot of papers haha.
Hopefully there's more to come. Until then, good luck!

@ Ronnie Mac
I agree with you

This one-shot is very interesting however, I feel like maybe instead of keeping it a one-shot, you should make it a little longer (although I know you based it on a dream). I just have this feeling that it's a bit incomplete. Other than the fact that I personally (no one else included) feel it's incomplete, I like it and if you were to write more, I would read whatever it was. There's just a few typos, but that's normal so just find them and you'll be fine! (:

This is outstanding, and wonderful, and everything in between. I wish my dreams were this detailed and cool. But, please continue... It would be nice :) I would surely read. Subscribed & Rec. <3

@ hunter eyes;
Will do.:c

This was really nice, I wish you would update more. C:

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Woah, this was so not what I was expecting, but I love it. It's so...mysterious that it makes you want to find out more. Of course, Aubrey's character and personality sounds like me. The more someone tries to push you away (if they happen to be special or specially attached to you) then it's like you can't get enough of them. Though this was a short piece, I really liked it. It was just mystery and creepiness and this dark background, this dark scene that made me want to read more and it was poor oomph and I loves it!

@ thisxisxme
Thanks dolllly<3

@ exhaleink
Mhm. I like your comment.:)

@ Deek8400
Aha. Yes, it's pretty weird how this was a dream.

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Dude this is really interesting! That's cool it was a dream first :D I am subscribing and will await your next chapter:) I'm curious to know the back story behind it! I really like your writing style, and I like the picture, that's pretty neat!:D Even though this was short, it had a lot of detail- something short chapters don't usually have, and that's also pretty neat! (I suck at writing short chapters- let alone detail haha so that's pretty awesome you can do that:D) Anyway, update soon:)

This is beautiful. Everything about it is beautiful. The idea, the layout, especially your writing! By far the best you've ever done. I can tell you spent a lot of effort on this. Please update soon, I'm very excited for the next chapter!!

Oh I like :)