If It Keeps You Around Then I'm Down - Comments

excuse me! do they work it out? do they get together? you're killing me here!!! what happens next?!?!?!?!

(comment swap says there still wasn't enough words)
Wow this is really good! The plot is clear, the writing is good too, it's pretty cool :D maybe you could try adding more description to make it even better :) well done. I also like the way you have him almost obsessed at the begining, the way he's counting every second (quite literally)
(and because I haven't read your other story to this) is this any link to all time low or is that just a coincidence? Hehe :) But yeah, I mainly only read fanfiction, and it's always good when I come across a new one. As I said, try and add more adjectives maybe to set the scene a bit more, but this is good!
UGHH gotta fill the comment swap quota >:( how annoying. Um so yeah I hope you write more because this is awesome and stuff.

Hey, comment swapper here- this isnt the type of story I would read as i tend to stay away from 'real life' characters. However, this was very nicely written although I'm personally not a fan of the layout as the bright text makes it hard for me to read.
The G.I.F at the top is cute and gives some background to the story :) Good luck with your writing.

** comment swap**

Honestly, I've never really enjoyed male slash. Or female for that matter. But I liked this. I like the way you write, it shows detail and you need detail to write a good story. As a matter of fact, yes, I loved this story.

Another thing I liked about this is the picture at the top! ^_^ I liked how it showed the two boys, etc. Anyways, good luck with this story! Your a great writer and I can't wait to see more of thiss. <3

Wow this is really good! The plot is clear, the writing is good too, it's pretty cool :D maybe you could try adding more description to make it even better :) well done
(and because I haven't read your other story to this) is this any link to all time low or is that just a coincidence? Hehe :) But yeah, I mainly only read fanfiction, and it's always good when I come across a new one. As I said, try and add more adjectives maybe to set the scene a bit more, but this is good!
UGHH gotta fill the comment swap quota >:( how annoying. Um so yeah I hope you write more because this is awesome and stuff.

I have always love the way you write and I love how there's humor in this as you always try to put that in and then there's the drama. Haha
You really are the best, heck you're my best friend after all. :p

It has been two years since? Damn that was a long time my friend. And I can see Jess showered you with comments, that girl, really. Unbelievable sometimes.

@ insignificant_carbon
Have you read the first two one shots? If not go read it! :D

Oh and this better have another follow up because seriously I will castrate you.
Teaser!! :p

WAAAAHHH.
You finally made a follow up but being an ass and doing that! I hate you!
Just kidding Mike,. But seriously, did you really have to do all that?
Damn. War ensues.

A follow up. YAY!

I'm so confus ed but I can't wait to find out more. please update if you do I'll lie naked on your bed with a jack mask on.

What happens next????? Tell me!!