Thank you for all the lovely comments everyone - I'm glad you liked the ending. I was originally going to end it just as it was and use the epilogue as a prologue in the sequel but I thought leaving it on a cliffhanger would be a bit too evil, especially as I'm not 100% when the sequel is going to go ahead ;P xxx
Wow. I love the ending. It was great and cute but without being totally cheesy, and I really liked that. Congratulations on finishing your first story, by the way! I wish I could ever finish stuff *sigh* However, if you decide to write a sequel I would love to read it, but if not I just look forward to reading more, just anything, that you write. Thank you for this reading experience. It's been absolutely lovely! x
Ahh, they are so sweet together. I love the fact that they're so mature and responsible, it makes the story much more believable. You continue to impress me with your writing, love it!
Between chapters I'm like bouncing around, not succeeding to wait patiantly for your updates, hahah. This was lovely, by the way. Garrett is a cutie. I'm a bit anxious to find out what will happen next, that's for sure!
Finally! They will finally be together for rea, I'm excited, haha! I agree with what the other people said about the sex scene, you did a good job writing it so that it didn't feel awkward! Other than that, by now you probably know, or so I hope, that I love this story. Can't wait for more!!
okay this is literally one of the best fanfics Ive ever had the pleasure to read okay, IM IN LOVE WITH IT, AW <3. Im sad not many chapters left but the hell, this is fucking perfect. I love you <3
@ w0lfmountain Aww thank you! Yeah, those scenes are quite hard to write but I'm glad you didn't find it awkward! I'm toying around with the idea of a sequel, I've written maybe two or three chapters for one at least 5 times now, each with a different idea in mind haha. But I'd definitely like to write one :) x
the last chapter was perfect, I'm not gonna lie I was expecting the sex scene to be incredibly awkward to read, they always are but not yours, it was asdfghjkl! haha
You're a talented writer, I'm disappointed to hear there's only a few chapters left! SEQUEL!!
I like the fact that there's a Yates' in there too! :D