It Was You I Was Thinking Of - Comments

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The layout is nice - I caught onto the song, and it works out with the song well, but I'm not sure the individual aspects work well together - the content background, the page background, and the banner all seem a bit disjointed from each other. I liked that it was legible though; you don't often see that on mibba.

As for the story, the description was great. There was a lovely building upon the previous information as the story went on, and I'd love to see more of your writing, especially if it's in the same style. Excellent job!

Love the song the title is based off of :D It took me a minute of singing the lyrics before it hit me like a ton of bricks :D Also, love the story, but all of your stories are great ^^ I don't have to worry about wasting my time reading because I know it's going to be amazing.

Comment Swap. Your layout is amazing. I love how the banner goes very well with the story. The story was just, so perfect, i guess you could say. I can't really think of the word i want to describe your story, but it was great. I loved how you described everything. I did not see any grammar or spelling errors. I usually don't like to read one shots, but i am glad i read this one. :)

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Layout I really like this layout. Between the background that reminds me of the decibel scales and the banner featuring an actual cassette tape I'm sort of completely charmed. I like that it seems music-y without resorting to the tired old trends of music notes, headphones, or sheet music. Also, it's completely legible, which is you know always a nice bonus.

Story You write flawlessly lovely description. Personification of the note and setting the lighting of the first few paragraphs creates just a wonderful interplay of description and dissonance. Early morning is usually associated with a sort of innocence. Breakfast, cuddling, not terrible, awful news.

I like the building of the relationship that you let us see through the letters and other little things.

The resolution was well done. Not perfect in the sense of a happy ending, but perfect for the piece and the exploration that you did within it.

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This is very, very well written. I absolutely love it! The begging makes me think its a suicide note at first, but it made me really curious. You should consider continuing it. I'd read it.

This was amazing!!