Hallow - Comments

This is sooooo sad! Love your writing though.

aw this was so beautiful but so sad..... i seriously started crying when i read that last chapter... this is seriously the saddest story i've ever read D:

I don't know if it was just me, but I thought it was kinda difficult to read and understand,... But oh well, you did good :3

Wow, that was stunningly beautifully written. An interesting plot twist and the ambiguity of the chapters leading up to it made for a very interesting read. THe style was unusual and interesting, and also my favorite style of writing. I really hope you never stop writing because you have some serious talent.

What? This can't be over D: This is so fantastic, I really hope that you do more in this universe and that you continue this in some way, because I love it so much and I'm really sad to see it end.

Confusing... but beautifully written <3

this was amazing though! Its so awesom! I love this story.

Oh my god. There are a lot of unresoled issues. As Memmyriders said. There is so much to know!

OH MY GOD!!! I loved it!!! Please, I feel like there's still some unresolved issues. Where is CC? Is Jake okay? What will happen to Andy and Ashley? Why did Jinxx do it? THERE'S SO MUCH I HAVE TO KNOW!!!! It's beautiful, but PLEASE answer at least some of the questions! :D <3

this is a fucking masterpiece, if this were a novel in a shop I would buy it without hesitation :D I love it, I would actually read it if it were an andley or not <3 makes me miss writing haha

Awwh </3

I really enjoy this so far. I'm only on the second chapter but I don't want to stop reading. I'm glad I found this story, even though I feel my heart breaking when I read it haha

I'm crying again, geez!!! It's so...unclear what's happening, but I think that's what makes this story so beautiful in its own way. It's so beautifully cruel and it depicts people we all love falling from grace into madness, and that's so sad. But it's beautifully written nonetheless, so update again soon please!!! :D <3

I know I've told you before on bvbfiction, but I love your style. It's choppy but at the same time it has a rhythm to it and it makes it seem so much more real. Whenever this fic is updated it makes my whole day :)

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I just started reading this today and honestly, it has made me cry 4 times. To even consider this being a possibility of any of their futures is just so horrible. I just saw them on Friday and they were AMAZING!!!!! They all looked so good, and to read this, it's just a harsh reality that is always a possibility. I hope that this never happens, but it's a very interesting read :) <3

I hope it gets all happy soon(:

this is so beautiful... if that makes any sense

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You seriously don't understand how much I love this <3