Betrayed - Comments

You should update this

pregos thats whats up

Preggers. Even though I think it would completely ruin the story >.<.

AH SHES FUCKING PREGNANT.

Shes prego. I think. If she has a baby it will ruin the stpry a bit for me. Every good story seems to make the main character prego, i hope Im wrong but its your story

love this please update soon

I don't really know this Alan guy, so I'm partial to Zacky (he's my favorite, lmao) but after what happened between them, it just ISN'T realistic for them to get back together! He raped her, so I don't know how much she can just forgive. But hey, it is fiction. Anything can happen!

I feel as if she should be with Zacky. I think it's okay and kind of interesting to have the thing with Alan going for a while but I think ultimately it should be Zacky. It would throw in the question of true forgiveness to the story as well. Zacky would have to completely forgive himself and Skye would completely have to forgive Zacky. Not to mention you could throw in the other guys' concerns. I just feel like the story would be better if you went the Zacky route. :) Keep up the awesome writing.

love this please update soon

Waittttt... So I'm confused. Is this a Zacky story? Cause now she's sounding like she doesn't like him anymore (Which is COMPLETELY Understandable.)

love this please update soon

I love, love, love this story, and I love the story line between Jimmy and Skye, but I think that because it's a Zacky story it should start going towards her and Zacky again. Of course after the Jimmy thing is cleared up. Other than that this is my favorite story as of right now and you do an awesome job of not annoying me with your plot lines or grammar, which seems to be a new trend on Mibba. Keep it up

love this please updates soon

Ugh!! I cannot wait for an update. PLEASEE! :DD

OMG I feel so bad for Skye! Leana's a fucking bitch... she needs to go :P Maybe she could get hit by a bus after confessing that she started all the problems.... Update again soon!!

I agree I totally think leana used his phone!

Leana totally used jimmys phone to text her, i cant write more im in school lol great chapter

Update soon it's a really good story and cant wait to see what happens next :-)

Update soon please :) I really like this

I think she needs to throw the fact that she has been avoiding them since Leana arrived on the tour and move her stuff onto the bus with Alan and Austin. She was with them when Leana arrived then went straight to the bunks, then spent 6 hours by herself. The rest of A7X are dicks too. Seriously how could they just leave her by herself especially Zacky who "loves" her.

Update soon please :)